Up to page 35 in the proofreading. The tenses have got better (probably famous last words), but pluralisation has got worse. The punctuation does follow a set of rules, consistently, it's just not an English-speaking set of rules. And I'm not sure whether correcting the format of the document is within the scope of the exercise. The way examples and quotes and so forth are set out just doesn't seem quite right. There's nothing I can point to and say "This is wrong", it just doesn't seem quite right.
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